If I were to rate that song, I would rate it 6.5(of 10).
The Instrumentals were good, and they kept my focus the whole way through the song.
I did feel they were a little cliche` to the genre, but good none the less.
The Vocals made me cry a little inside.
It was like he was stretching his vocal chords, it sounded strained and very forceful.
The lyrics had a good point to them, however they were a little scatterbrained.
If they had stuck to one subject and built on it, instead of fitting as many 'cool' lines in it as they could, it would have been more entertaining, and painted a picture in the heads of the people listening (Which is what I think all lyrics should do).
The song I would like to post is
Fell in love without you (acoustic) by Motion City Soundtrack(ignore the video, it's pretty dumb)
By the way, i think this is an excellent topic.

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