MCR666's Poetry

I noticed how on EB when people posted their poetry, one or two people might reply to it and then the thread would die and nobody would ever find it again. I've seen alot of great poems out there too. I love reading people's poems.
So, this being one of my attempts to make this better than EB, lets put all our poems together in one big thread.
That way, maybe theyareless likely to get lost
And I don't want to be the only one with poems in here either.


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And on that last night we were, the stars sparkled in your eyes. You held me close in your warm embrace, your aura strong and protective. We held one another in the moonlight, the ashes of a thousand memories glimmering in the air around us. You touched my soul and said sometimes there is no line between love and friendship, you said we have something stronger than both. You pressed your lips to mine in a moment unlike any imaginable, swallowing my fear, and in a heartbeat we knew everything there was to know about one another. You held me to your heart as dew-soft tears filled my eyes, and I wanted this to last forver... The night wind sang to us, it said that which must end only grows stronger before death. On the last night we were, I became a part of you, and you of me, a part that will never sever.




10-30-08
mcr666





It's not a poem by format,but rather a piece of writing I did and found to be poetic.I havemade a video for this that will appear on Youtube as soon as I can get around to it.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m4HpLrGZ6X4

I would paste my 'My Kind Of Art' here
But even I can't be bothered to scroll down past all that writing

It's good but I really don't like love poems in general....

Still good though.

I totally know what you're saying about people spamming their poems over there though. Most of those poems they have over there are not good anyway, they're all silly cutting stuff.


I think that this one can be for your poems and then each person can have their own thread,
just keep it all in one thread per person.

Plus, the people here I don't think are mainly the ones who do the spamming anyway.

But if you would really prefer it I can just merge my stuff in here.

I just think each person's stuff should be separate, personally.

WhiteDemonist wrote:

Plus, the people here I don't think are mainly the ones who do the spamming anyway.

Thank God
Or thankyou; ID

Ah well, it was just a thought. *shrugs*

SORROW AND ICE


The wind pushes my hair back from my face as I trek across the frozen terrain. Where I am going, I do not know, nor why I am going. I just know I must walk. I wonder if I'm at the start or the end. There is nothing but white in all directions, and yet no sound. My own breathing is nearly deafening to me in the unbearable silence. Snowflakes sting my nose. It's cold. I lose feeling in my limbs as I sink into the snow. Now that my limbs and body lie motionless, the use no energy and leave more for my brain. As I lay here, I realize why I am running. I am running away from my heartache and I am running away from you. Every cell of me is cold and I think maybe it it is better to die in the snow, to let my blood freeze, than to stay with you.
Because even as my heart begins to freeze and I lose consciousness, as the breath escapes from mylungs, my mind presents me with my last dying thought. That this, my frozen deathbed, isn't as cold as you.



12-08-08
A.J. Howard (mcr666)

Holy hell.


That was awesome.

Did you write this about me?

It reminds me of the time I ran away in a snow storm. o_o

That last one was really good.
Although the only thing I have to say in criticism is that for the idea your presenting, it's slightly short and non-descript.
Your timing wasn't rushed, but more descriptive would have been a major plus. (like where he/she came from, or least what he/she felt while he/she was there).
Over all, very nice.

WhiteDemonist wrote:

Holy hell.


That was awesome.

Did you write this about me?

It reminds me of the time I ran away in a snow storm. o_o

I wasnt trying to, but I'll officially dedicate it to you if you want. ^_^ I was just a bit bored in trig, and had this idea.

Nation wrote:

That last one was really good.
Although the only thing I have to say in criticism is that for the idea your presenting, it's slightly short and non-descript.
Your timing wasn't rushed, but more descriptive would have been a major plus. (like where he/she came from, or least what he/she felt while he/she was there).
Over all, very nice.

I thank you for being one of the few to actually say more than just "it's awesome". Lol
I thought about making it longer, but wasnt sure how I could do that without drawing it out and making it overly lengthy. Plus, I was writing in my little notebook rather than the big one I usually keep ideas in, so my space was limited.
I'll definitely get some more written, or at least some more posted. I have almost 70 altogether, and the lenght and style are so varied you'd be surprised they are all written by the same person.

I'm not that girl, but....



I'm not a hero
I'm not the prettiest girl you'll meet
I cant fit into a size zero
i'm tall, awkward, and i have big feet

My glasses are crooked
My hair's an absolute mess
I've watched Trainspotting 57 times
And I didnt pass the trig test

I wont go down in history
in 100 years they'll forget my name
when everyone got makeovers
i decided to stay the same

my front teeth are much too big
my jeans are full of holes
while everyone else treasures their looks
i treasure my soul

maybe i'm not THAT girl
BUT

I'm the girl who'll cuddle
When others prefer sex
I'm the girl who shows up early
Instead of not being ready yet
I'm the girl who gives you a hug
and refuses to let you go
i'll tell you how i feel about you
beacuase i dont doubt what i know
i dont have lots of money
But I'll write you the nicest note
when you say something nice to me
I'll blush rather than gloat

and when it comes down to it

they wont be pretty forever
but my ability to love and my kindness and my hugs
aren't going anywhere

so what will you choose?




by Amanda (mcr666)